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I actually like the white, clear background. It makes it very clean. Also the borders and the typeface for the titles are pretty cool. (Tho, why is the border of the image on 'inside 1st panel' different than all the others...?) Only suggestion, you might want to try and push the title on the front cover even more. Make the size difference of the different lines even more extreme. Could be fun.
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I really like your comment. All the design elements were well thought out and appropriate for this brochure. The reviewers were a bit leary of the lovely Fenwick and I think this is a awesome solution.