A Review of Brochure targeting potential Friends Group members by Joel Acevedo

Too much text

  • Joel Acevedo

    Joel Acevedo

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    Too much text

    Posted on Sep 11, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    I like the brochure. I agree with some of the posters about the color... but something they didn't mention is the typography. IMHO there is too much text.

    Suggestions: 1. Trim content 2. Use more padding to separate content for more readability

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