• Martin Kruusement

    Martin Kruusement

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 4
    • Usability: 2
    • Strategy: 3
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    Posted on Jan 30, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    I think the fundamental flaw is that you expect people to know how many hours they need..

    I would completely redo the 3-box system. No need to use hidden stuff just to look cool :) People are not going to open them.

    Perhaps the main headline could be done with a slightly darker color to give it more impact and contrast.

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    this call to action requires too much scrolling. My gut says this will be missed

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    Empty space. You need to optimize your space

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    Blank space

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    No CSS Used. Style your inputs

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    Need to make the Logo bigger

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    remove spacing here

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    Need some work here also

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    Gradient should be changed to other color white does not looking good to me!

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    I'm guessing the typical customer has no idea how much hours she should book with you.

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    The design of this really doesn't fit with the other elements on the page. Perhaps it should be open right away (and be smaller)

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    this arrow doesn't really point anywhere.. and the message itself is sort of weird (you should let the users themselves start feeling excited)

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    nice detail here here :)

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    These are critical elements for trust. Move them up so people see them.

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    I'm not a fan of the red button with the saw-blade element really.. perhaps remove the blade icon and make it green just to test?

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    It took me 10 minutes to realize that this is an expandable button!

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    That's a mess... try to make this section much more clear.

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    Good, but perhaps too overstated. Perhaps you could make the gauge smaller and place it next to this text and move the smaller text below them: ["""""""]---We can start.. [GAUGE]--RIGHT AWAY [______]---smaller text smaller text smaller text

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    Nice and clear. Good work.