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Augus, this is a great design. Very well thought out and constructed! There's a few leading issues here and there, but this is a solid piece. I wish you the best on this project.
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This looks slightly out of line vertically with the other side.
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Nice typography here. LIKE
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You seem to have some spacing issues; try 960 Grid plugin
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These scream for a shine, shadow or something; spice them up
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Too much space!
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Make these italic, OR use a serif font. Will help with typography
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Spice these up too.
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A lot of space between the name/title area and the personal statement.
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I think this would look awesome if you decreased the leading a bit.
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How would it look if it read straight across like so: available for hire ...?
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I think the CV will look better without the "AVAILABLE FOR" text. Removing it will get more space between "Hire and Freelance Work" and "My Skill Set". Think of it.
