A Review of Photographer Page by Lloyd Major

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  • Lloyd Major

    Lloyd Major

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    274

    • Design: 4
    • Usability: 5
    • Strategy: 0
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    Posted on Jan 19, 2012 at 3:28 PM

    Clean Freash Design very nice too would buy this site in a min but the middle kind a let it now with it to an extent i was expecting more and in all a go blend of colours and and stand out design

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  • 1

    Love this

  • 2

    I'd replace the social boxes with monochrome, white icons

  • 3

    Whilst I love the idea, the execution seems a bit poor; I'd love it if the whole top could be replaced with a big photo, nicely blending into the body

  • 4

    I realise the fonts and sizes are not final; if not, both the images and the fonts need to be toned down considerably!

  • 5

    Too much text, blend in some pullquotes or dropquotes

  • 6

    The gradient is a little harsh, try a lighter blue for the header color

  • 7

    The clouds are taking some of the impact away from the photos. Try reducing their size

  • 8

    Try adding a drop shadow to these images to make them pop

  • 9

    Add some spacing between the title and content.

  • 10

    Give the titles a different color than the content

  • 11

    This is getting lost in the background. Try changing the color of the ribbon

  • 12

    I'm not sure if I like the blue tones here. It reminds me of any movie where someone is being operated on..or where someone just died. You could also try reducing the size just a bit.

  • 13

    Add some spacing above your social icons

  • 14

    There seems to be some inconsistant spacing in your contact form

  • 15

    Love the taped profile pic

  • 16

    I'm not a fan of this treatment. As a primary banner or headers -- this really is not "saying" anything

  • 17

    Good area

  • 18

    Good footer

  • 19

    Not certain what this is???

  • 20

    these cloud-like images do not work with the other graphical images

  • 21

    fields may not be wide enough to capture text

  • 22

    The clouds looks very different to the icons. In the other hand, it's only one cloud cloned... do a couple more.

  • 23

    Some kind of subtle shade will help you to give the photos a sense of position in the general composition.

  • 24

    Keep in mind the fold!

  • 25

    Make it straight

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  • 26

    Not looks aligned to me!

  • 27

    I think you need to give some space here to make it readable also need bolder font and darker color!