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Yunus ~
I think this is a good start. What's not working for me is - the header area doesn't really work.
- Not certain whether the top of this page needs a logo, and some navigation. Is this a "one page blog template?" I can't tell (which may be a design flaw)
- The header treatment is too distracting. Not certain what you're striving for. The cloud image detracts from the photos. You should avoid that approach.
- The color works - retain the balance within within each section (the blue and white makes type very easy to read)
- The footer area is well crafted
Keep going on this design. I encourage you to drop back to black and white (minimal wireframes) which will ensure that you workout the elements of the design -- without relying on color and detailed treatments.
Best of luck
Michael+
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Love this
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I'd replace the social boxes with monochrome, white icons
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Whilst I love the idea, the execution seems a bit poor; I'd love it if the whole top could be replaced with a big photo, nicely blending into the body
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I realise the fonts and sizes are not final; if not, both the images and the fonts need to be toned down considerably!
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Too much text, blend in some pullquotes or dropquotes
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The gradient is a little harsh, try a lighter blue for the header color
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The clouds are taking some of the impact away from the photos. Try reducing their size
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Try adding a drop shadow to these images to make them pop
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Add some spacing between the title and content.
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Give the titles a different color than the content
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This is getting lost in the background. Try changing the color of the ribbon
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I'm not sure if I like the blue tones here. It reminds me of any movie where someone is being operated on..or where someone just died. You could also try reducing the size just a bit.
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Add some spacing above your social icons
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There seems to be some inconsistant spacing in your contact form
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Love the taped profile pic
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I'm not a fan of this treatment. As a primary banner or headers -- this really is not "saying" anything
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Good area
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Good footer
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Not certain what this is???
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these cloud-like images do not work with the other graphical images
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fields may not be wide enough to capture text
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The clouds looks very different to the icons. In the other hand, it's only one cloud cloned... do a couple more.
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Some kind of subtle shade will help you to give the photos a sense of position in the general composition.
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Keep in mind the fold!
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Make it straight
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Not looks aligned to me!
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I think you need to give some space here to make it readable also need bolder font and darker color!
