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You've got a great start here, just a few inconstancies in the alignments.
I mentioned this in the details on the left, but the blue tones you used on the images reminds me of death scenes or hospitals in just about every movie. Just something to keep in mind :)
Cant wait to see the next revision!
-Simon
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Love this
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I'd replace the social boxes with monochrome, white icons
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Whilst I love the idea, the execution seems a bit poor; I'd love it if the whole top could be replaced with a big photo, nicely blending into the body
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I realise the fonts and sizes are not final; if not, both the images and the fonts need to be toned down considerably!
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Too much text, blend in some pullquotes or dropquotes
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The gradient is a little harsh, try a lighter blue for the header color
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The clouds are taking some of the impact away from the photos. Try reducing their size
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Try adding a drop shadow to these images to make them pop
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Add some spacing between the title and content.
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Give the titles a different color than the content
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This is getting lost in the background. Try changing the color of the ribbon
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I'm not sure if I like the blue tones here. It reminds me of any movie where someone is being operated on..or where someone just died. You could also try reducing the size just a bit.
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Add some spacing above your social icons
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There seems to be some inconsistant spacing in your contact form
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Love the taped profile pic
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I'm not a fan of this treatment. As a primary banner or headers -- this really is not "saying" anything
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Good area
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Good footer
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Not certain what this is???
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these cloud-like images do not work with the other graphical images
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fields may not be wide enough to capture text
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The clouds looks very different to the icons. In the other hand, it's only one cloud cloned... do a couple more.
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Some kind of subtle shade will help you to give the photos a sense of position in the general composition.
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Keep in mind the fold!
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Make it straight
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Not looks aligned to me!
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I think you need to give some space here to make it readable also need bolder font and darker color!
