A Review of Home Page Redesign by ... ...

Nicely Executed Redesigned Homepage

http://dev.yournextseven.com

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    Good example of social proof

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  • 2

    This is a bit crowded. I would put the screenshot one at a time with a title explaining what it is and a couple of benefits of why this is useful

  • 3

    Testimonials are great. Even better if you have video one!

  • 4

    The inverted "y" looks strange and make the logo hard to read.

  • 5

    This call to action should be more prominent. Maybe you should put it under the screenshots and make it bigger

  • 6

    As I navigated through the site, I found this introduction to be too quick and difficult to read. It would be more effective if you simplified the presentation with an example that followed through tracking one employee.

  • 7

    This area does not need to be on the home page. I would provide a link to the testimonials and give them a more effective presentation of their own.

  • 8

    Your flash intro distracts form the menu. I was navigating to the bottom of the page before I noticed the menu

  • 9

    I would try and change the type face

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http://yournextseven.com

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    too much content. you should reduce by 50%

  • 2

    Nice!

  • 3

    needs a better type treatment. Try bolding the key words

  • 4

    too many words - reduce by 50-70%

  • 5

    where's the $27

  • 6

    try "What Customers Say about Your Next Seven!"

  • 7

    I would have put the screenshot inside the green frame.

  • 8

    The pictures of people for the testimonials are important to build trust. They should be bigger.

  • 9

    Black is a strange color for call to action. Not visible enough

  • 10

    I don't like the slightly turned screenshots. Maybe try with making them horizontal and add a border.

  • 11

    Is is a call to action or not. I don't understand why it is here.

  • 12

    Make it look maybe more web 2.0ish?

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