A Review of B2B Website Redesign by Amy Feger

Text hitting pic

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    Text hitting pic

    Posted on Sep 03, 2009 at 3:19 AM

    Hi Andrew.

    I just checked out your website and had the feel of "clean shop" and it looks great.

    Just a few type things you may want to checkout.

    Under "latest headline" the text is touching the pic.

    Maybe try cleaning up the adobe icon in photoshop... I can see white edges here and there.

    In the bottom right corner quote; The type should be left aligned and the quote marks pushed to outside of the boxed shape (rather than lined up to test.)

    All through out the text presented in the top pics that switch every few seconds... There are gaps of white space between those words that really should come in. (track and Kern stuff). Same with the popular features text.

    Well, off I go to bug someone else...