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Hi Dino!
I was good and read all the reviews before posting this.
:0)
Once again I find your color choices lovely. I also find the big block over " home" refreshing.
The only suggestions that I have are:
To tweak all spacing between words where you find gaps of white space. It is overly abundant throughout the text blocks. I see you are forcing the left and right alignment on the text. when you go in and to kern and track the words, it may leave a lot of long words that need to be broken with the en dash. Only allow one at most for this little amount of text. (reword if necessary to avoid the en dash.)
In the word "Professionals" under "Eventica" there is a gap around the second s and the i hits the n.
Maybe, close up space between the words of titles just slightly.
Maybe add a subtle color difference to the links "Get to Know us" and "See our services" to separate it from the above text.
After viewing your current front page. I would also bring in the space between "Design" "&" "code" in the balloon area It is in white text against the pink).
I love the refreshing white space. It reminds me a bit of how I redesigned a magazine at school.
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Amy Feger commented:Hi Zeno!
I meant when the balloon picture changes there is text presented, then the balloon, then the text...There in the pink background and white text... You will find the gaps in Design & code.
lol
It's like a treasure hunt.
I think it is interesting how you have the arrow buttons as is (it was just a suggestion about text color.)
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Zeno Popovici commented:
Hey Amy :)
I see what you mean ... those pictures are just for demo there ... no real banners have been thought of :)
I love treasure hunting! D: Thanks!
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Hey Amy,
Yeah, you're right the text is not yet thought of properly, we'll fix that in the final version.
About: "In the word "Professionals" under "Eventica" there is a gap around the second s and the i hits the n.", it's how the font renders in the browser there's no gap there.
Action buttons are market by downwards arrow. We'll reduce the number of action buttons to two (taking them out from flickr and twitter.
Design & Code is the logo descriptor. It's not pink but grey. You can see it properly on the site.
Thanks for your suggestions Amy! :) Z.