A Review of SwimKiwi Logo by Ben Thomas

Lose the "helmet" (#2 and #3)

  • Ben Thomas

    Ben Thomas

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Lose the "helmet" (#2 and #3)

    Posted on Sep 01, 2009 at 9:44 PM

    The last one is best - but on white surfaces apply the color treatment from #2 to the type. I actually think the typestyle and color treatment can even stand on its own, without a mark.

    I have no idea about Kiwis and New Zealand - so my opinions are specifically addressing design, not brand approach.