A Review of Landing page for research paper library by Al Belote

Work on information hierarchy

  • Al Belote

    Al Belote

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    Work on information hierarchy

    Posted on Dec 16, 2010 at 11:16 AM

    I'm not sure what to look at first - everything is kind of neutral. Suggestions:

    1. Adjust buttons in the "Ready to start writing your essay? Lets go!" panel.

      • Use parallel structure for the wording of the buttons. Currently there are two verb-based and two descriptive.

      • Give the buttons some color (light to medium blue perhaps) and make the text bold.

    2. Bump up the headings in the two light blue panels on the left.

    3. Make the background white in the main panel with "JFK's Life."

    Other issues:

    1. Lose the gray arrows behind the green buttons or make them actual arrows. The gray arrows are confusing.

      1. Anchor "worried about plagirism" link to something. It's floating. Maybe put it on a single line above the search tab.
    • Jens Schriver
      Jens Schriver commented:
      Posted: on Dec 16, 2010 at 1:47 PM

      Hi Al, Thanks for taking the time to comment - really appreciated!

      I agree that there's currently a problem with what to look at first, so thanks a lot for the specific suggestions. We'll try out each of your suggestions, all good stuff.

      Kind regards, Jens

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