A Review of Landing page for research paper library by Michael Rawlins

Readability issues (fonts a bit light - need some more contrast)

  • Michael Rawlins

    Michael Rawlins

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    This is a very usable design. It has good affordances for buttons (and other controls).

    Fixes: 1) under the logo - the tagline is difficult to read. 2) some of the font sizes are a bit small. I'm a baby boomer - and not the target audience. You may want to look at adding font size controller one day - so the users can pump up the size of the fonts as needed. 3) I like the call to action "Ready to Start writing your Essay..." You could make it a bit more persuasive by tweaking "4 steps to completing a great Essay" 4) The modules named "Students & Profs" is a great trust marker - leveraging the social norm of social proof (see Robert Cialdini's "Six Weapons of Influence") If you add a way of entering data for a registration (right there) you will start to see more conversions. 5) Consider adding a whitepaper or ebook -- that illustrates success stories. instead of giving it away - leverage Cialdini's persuasive norm "Commitment and Consistency" by requesting the email address (or more info) from people.

    I think you have achieved a good visual balance in the modules. Be careful of how deep the page scrolls. It can sometimes make key information invisible to visitors who are scanning for content "superficially" - versus reading for elaborate details (see ELM concept).

    Really nice site design. Good luck!

    • Jens Schriver
      Jens Schriver commented:
      Posted: on Dec 12, 2010 at 8:48 PM

      Hi Michael,

      Thank you so much for the feedback. Nice to see you have a persuasion oriented approach, great stuff.

      Particularly good comments about the font size and "4 steps to...". Really appreciated!

      All the best, Jens

    • Prashant Dubey
      Prashant Dubey commented:
      Posted: on Dec 13, 2010 at 12:22 AM

      Michael, I really love reading your feedback and specially the support URLs you provide for understanding the feedback in depth is something I always look for. It's really great!