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I'll add my 2 cents - agree with the other reviews, loving the design and illustration and focusing on adding the navigation and making this more a site than a flyer, but i think there are some more things to add, to increase conversion:
Instead of "plus... it's Free..." and a separate Submit My Site, create a button saying - SUBMIT MY SITE as top sentence, and It's Free! as the sentence below
If there's a sign up/ creating an account, it should be on the first page. If i have submitted my site, i'm not sure i want to see this page everytime and scroll down to see if it's featured, so you could use cookies to re-direct users to another page (or have this top section as an expand/ collapse panel)
i think that since the elements are round (the logo, points), the buttons should have round corners as well
www.makeovermachine.com
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Header
Push the main tagline down below the header to cater for a possible navigation, and to clearly define the header of the website.
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Call to Action Panel
I'd push this down below the bullet points as a horizontal row
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Smaller Graphic
Could make the graphic a little smaller so that it lines up with the left set of bullet points. Your main tagline would site above this, likely horizontally and center aligned.
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Divider
Create some sort of clear definition between the main banner graphic, and the portfolio section. Currently, this part looks like a simple H2 following some intro content.
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Client Name
The heading for the client name is a little strange as it doesn't cut across both screenshots. Consider extending it all the way to the right, or lose the background color and have a simple border-bottom.
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More Footer
I hope that's not the end of the footer. The top area seems to have so much effort put into it, but the footer seems like a disappointing afterthought. Even if you intend not to have a top navigation, do keep a good footer with the necessary legal info and links, about and contact information. The footer should be light text on a dark background (not unlike the CF site) for a clear definition as well.
