A Review of SwimKiwi Logo by Amy Feger

m to k color

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    m to k color

    Posted on Aug 31, 2009 at 10:28 PM

    Hi! I really like what you have going on with the first logo. I suggest maybe keeping the top one with the colors of the third one and moving the beak up as to hold a circular dot at the top of the beak implying a small ball in balance. Making it a bit more playful and active.

    I love that you built something out from the W.

    At second look I also really like the third one. But, because it is two distinctly different colors I keep seeing a sideways y rather than a K coming from the m. maybe the color from m to k needs to be more gradual? Gradient across word?

    Well, those are my suggestions. I have to admit my knowledge of what is considered tacky or not I fall a bit short with.

    Best of Luck!

    • Amy Feger
      Amy Feger commented:
      Posted: on Sep 01, 2009 at 3:13 AM

      Ok, I now have a new favorite since I last seen this! I like the fourth one down.

    • Jas Fun
      Jas Fun commented:
      Posted: on Sep 08, 2009 at 7:30 PM

      I love the first logo too - and if a comment counts from an Aussie the green is more eye catching than the blue. I think the Kiwi bird is a clever way of integrating the word Kiwi visually instead of just "dumping" it around the logo.
      Well done!

    • Bency Silvester
      Bency Silvester commented:
      Posted: on Oct 08, 2009 at 6:01 PM

      Love the first one. Original and Unique

    • pranav adsule
      pranav adsule commented:
      Posted: on Jan 17, 2010 at 12:55 AM

      I like the fourth one down.