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Most of the comments made about cover it, so forgive me for repeating. Yes there is too much going on. Flames must go, fewer bubbles if you must keep them, lose the box around 'custom web services'. All are necessities to me.
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If you wish to keep the contrast in "SYS" then you should drop the colour divide and carry it lightly through the "OX". Whether you carry it through the letters OX or the circle is up to you, but it should flow. I don't mind the font, other to suggest perhaps something just a little less vertical. Just a little.
Forgive the cliche, but to say it should be minimalised is probably the best way to summarise it. Overall I think it's great though. Good work.
