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I like the changes you've incorporated throughout the layout. I might suggest a little bolder color in the before and after chart - the headline could be stronger and the colors a bit more exciting. Put Compare results: in bold and I would suggest putting it in a reversed headline so it really pops.
Tighten up the leading between lines in the Benefits and Features charts - you should have closer line spacing than you have paragraph spacing.
Otherwise, terrific improvement and good luck!
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Top spacing
Add a little bit of top spacing; now it seems the text is too close to the top border and the shade.
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Abhishek Kumar commented:agree, it could use a bit more spacing but i think the current spacing is fine too.
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Make it smaller
I think this box could be smaller. Analyse the search queries for the searched keywords and see how long they are = length of searchbox.
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Abhishek Kumar commented:
i think this site would have product names which would fit in that box, i suggested in previous iteration to make it bigger as i could see even the current product name is long enough.. also, making the box bigger will make it more prominent and visible to the users.
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Drop the lower lines
A very personal thought but I'd drop the bottom lines, I think the lines are used between the elements, so I think the bottom ones are redundant.
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Abhishek Kumar commented:
this is a good idea, may be something which can be tried and look at.. the only problem could happen when u remove the lines, the bottom links would look like it may fall.
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