• Danny Naz

    Danny Naz

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    Posted on Sep 07, 2010 at 3:23 PM

    not bad attempt. I mean it's clean, straight forward and easy to navigate. But it's missing something. Not sure what, but something that gives it an edge. Try adding some secondary colors in there to liven up the site.

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    Top spacing

    Add a little bit of top spacing; now it seems the text is too close to the top border and the shade.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:27 AM

      agree, it could use a bit more spacing but i think the current spacing is fine too.

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    Make it smaller

    I think this box could be smaller. Analyse the search queries for the searched keywords and see how long they are = length of searchbox.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:29 AM

      i think this site would have product names which would fit in that box, i suggested in previous iteration to make it bigger as i could see even the current product name is long enough.. also, making the box bigger will make it more prominent and visible to the users.

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    Drop the lower lines

    A very personal thought but I'd drop the bottom lines, I think the lines are used between the elements, so I think the bottom ones are redundant.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:31 AM

      this is a good idea, may be something which can be tried and look at.. the only problem could happen when u remove the lines, the bottom links would look like it may fall.