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    Posted on Sep 05, 2010 at 2:32 PM

    Hi Richard,

    The content is presented now much better.

    Few issues:

    1. The main text is still to complicated and too long. I took the liberty of creating a shorter one on the mockup. It's not perfect but will show you what I have in mind.

    2. I would change Get started now into more to the point call to action Upload now and move it to the first step. This way it's within the context.

    3. Send us imply email or snail mail. I would suggest using Upload

    4. IMHO Examples should be first in the top menu. It's more important for the user to see the results than to learn how it works it's magic.

    5. On the graphical note 2 columns below should be from side to side (aligned with main text)

    6. They should also have more white space in text as it feels very compressed at the moment.

    Cheers!

    Michael

    (user experience designer & strategist)

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    • Richard Miles
      Richard Miles commented:
      Posted: on Sep 07, 2010 at 12:30 PM

      Thanks - I agree with a lot of your points and will incorporate to make less text. Wish I could do "upload now" - that was my original design, but we have to launch with "get started now" - still early stages, so in a few months we'll be able to migrate to fully automated uploads.

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