A Review of Prima Planta by Abhishek Kumar

a few things..

  • Abhishek Kumar

    Abhishek Kumar

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    a few things..

    Posted on Sep 03, 2010 at 4:02 PM

    i like the concept but u can do a lot to improve it- at least try a few things..

    • may be use just the leafs to create the palm shape.

    • instead of using a circle in background, try a different shape, something circular only but not exact circle.

    • the font used for 'prima planta' is not fitting well here, try something else, may be one of the handwritten fonts.

    • Cedric Ruiz
      Cedric Ruiz commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 7:40 PM

      Thx for the comments. I made some changes based on your feedback. I changed the palm shape a little bit and I tried the handwritten font. What do you think?

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    • Cedric Ruiz
      Cedric Ruiz commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:48 PM

      Some new corrections, and trying new colors.

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    • Birger Eelen
      Birger Eelen commented:
      Posted: on Sep 07, 2010 at 4:08 AM

      For me these are very helpful comments; I think your new corrections and colors make it look even better!

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