• Adam Bruzon

    Adam Bruzon

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    Posted on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:49 AM

    Hi Richard,

    This Design is cool - I like where it is going, only a few points on this one:

    1. I think the colour scheme can be a bit more adventurous, grey/blue kind of die on the top of the page and then you have a bronze title under the main image which doesn't work for me.

    2. The main images are great but I feel they are too big height wise which creates too much space before the information.

    3. The padding/margins between the three columns at the bottom section of the page could be less to bring the information closer together.

    4. As Shawn Johnston pointed out the font choice is not the best, but i guess as long as you have the backup fonts in place and it looks good with those fonts too you should be fine, although most people will probably not see this font.

    5. I dont quite know what to do on this page. The Read more at the bottom of the blocks of text do not stand out as a link or clickable object as they are exactly the same style as the static text on the page.

    6. Label the random number at the top of the page.... It looks a bit random and odd - i assume it is a telephone number...

    7. Along the lines of call to action points, the Schedule an appointment is useless at the bottom of the page and I assume you want people to Schedule an appointment, so make it clear and bring it up to the top of the page and make it more visible as a clickable item, button or link.

    Hope that helps.....

    • Richard Miles
      Richard Miles commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 12:38 PM

      Thanks. I will incorporate some of these suggestions in later revisions. I appreciate it very much.

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  • 1

    main menu

    Main menu can be a bit more interesting, and the phone number needs more attention.

  • 2

    Space the icon a bit

    try to float the title to like the content and let some more space for the icons

  • 3

    title out of place

    Try some different color and maybe a border bottom like the one you have in the footer

  • 4

    title out of place

    Try some different color and maybe a border bottom like the one you have in the footer

  • 5

    I love the images

    This images tell a lot of thinks so this has a good impact for your users

  • 6

    it looses it's focus

    Because of the big images that are good the logo looses it's focus, I think you can fix that by adding some more height to the header, and if it's necessary, for the first fold, make the height of the big pictures smaller