• Abhishek Kumar

    Abhishek Kumar

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    a few things..

    Posted on Sep 03, 2010 at 9:33 AM

    this is getting better and u r almost there..

    • the add to basket box should be right aligned with the main description box.
    • i assume the logo on top is clikable and takes u to the homepage.
    • personally i prefer the term 'shopping cart' than what you have here - 'basket'.
    • Steven Johnson
      Steven Johnson commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 9:49 AM

      Thanks Abhishek,

      Yes, I noticed the align to the right after I uploaded the image, so I've already corrected that.

      Logo is clickable.

      Based on all my other ecommerce websites, basket works better than cart for the UK market, so that's what I'm going to stick with. Of course I'll split test but I'm sure basket will come out better.

      Any suggestions on getting higher marks for purpose and engagement? You seem to have marked them 3 all through this website, even after implementing your suggestions each time.

      Thanks again,

      Steve

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  • 1

    Top spacing

    Add a little bit of top spacing; now it seems the text is too close to the top border and the shade.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:27 AM

      agree, it could use a bit more spacing but i think the current spacing is fine too.

  • 2

    Make it smaller

    I think this box could be smaller. Analyse the search queries for the searched keywords and see how long they are = length of searchbox.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:29 AM

      i think this site would have product names which would fit in that box, i suggested in previous iteration to make it bigger as i could see even the current product name is long enough.. also, making the box bigger will make it more prominent and visible to the users.

  • 3

    Drop the lower lines

    A very personal thought but I'd drop the bottom lines, I think the lines are used between the elements, so I think the bottom ones are redundant.

    • Abhishek Kumar
      Abhishek Kumar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 03, 2010 at 10:31 AM

      this is a good idea, may be something which can be tried and look at.. the only problem could happen when u remove the lines, the bottom links would look like it may fall.