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It's better, but I still think your main selling points are getting lost. I made a quick mockup - you need to have your artist make it work, but:
Put the search box underneath, not up in top nav. Maybe change the word "search" to "shop" or "go shopping!'
I still have a hard time with "Save time" and "Browse"
I'm not a fan of the small script font - too hard to read for my taste.
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Richard Miles commented:No problem. Let me know when the next revision is ready to look at. I don't know if what you do is to let people "find the really great deals others got" but if you do, I think that might be a really strong selling point. Everyone has buyer's remorse from time to time, and most people assume they didn't get the best deal possible -- if you can tease them that they can find out what deals other people are getting, well, hey.....
Thanks for taking the time to make a mockup. It's easier to visualize.
Your wording is very direct and terse. I'll give this another shot. ;-)
Michelle