A Review of Larousse by Luke Marohn

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  • Luke Marohn

    Luke Marohn

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    2 Votes
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    Posted on Sep 02, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    Hi Ivan,

    Here are my thoughts about your design.

    • Seems very dark, I would lighten up the colors a bit.
    • The font is very out dated, Check out some cool san serif fonts on dafont.com or something
    • The Blending of the images on the front could use some work too. They seem very dark and the statue looks completely out of place,
    • Hopefully I'm not totally stupid, as i have never used an encylapedia, but If it has more than just archatechure in it, then add something else in, PEOPLE! ANIMALS! BUILDINGS! PLANTS!

    In fact, a cool thing to do would be like On the left have a desert theme, have the pyramids, snakes, cactus

    Then that fades into like an urban scene, with cool urban stuff, from there it goes into a rainforest, with monkeys and other coolio stuff, and then fades into like an ocean at the end.

    Just an idea though >.>

    I also feel the colors you chose dont really fit together,

    http://www.kuler.com will fix that though!

    Good Luck! all i have to say is

    Keep it simple, creative and modern! hopefully we can help you do that.