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I'm not sure what is this artwork for - is it an illustration to something, or an independent picture? The body looks a bit too refined for me, I would paint the skin more detailed.
Nose and lips seem to be a bit rotated to the right - I'm not sure why this looks like this, maybe it happened while you were making the red splash?
I think that you should decide about the background - you have too many patterns there... and also a few more different patterns on the body. That would be the first thing to change if you wanted to work on this some more. At least I think so :) good luck!
