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Okay, this is wonderful..but I really think there are some things you can do to make it EXCELLENT.
Please de-bulk the lounge area image header...it's got way to much stuff in it - in terms of neatening the composition, here is an idea for some things to remove:
wooden chalkboard menu, drafts, coffee and burger on table (because the burger is also resting on the bare table - not very sanitary), the waiter (the serving cart), the guitar (put Live Music in words instead perhaps), the bottle and whatever else that is on top of the brown couch - far right)..the chef in the back, and his countertop, and that wine bottle on the counter, also the 'please wait to be served' sign - shouldn't that be behind the counter (therefore its legs will be hidden?)
You see, that lounge area must feel unencumbered and truly relaxing for it to entice those who wish to eat, work, play...
Yes, somebody said widen your content area below already...I also agree with previous comments about the room between your text/graphical elements in the content area below the header and the point size of the text..you also need a bit more leading (space between lines)..
The Facebook and Twitter icons are weirdly placed, and are a bit indistinguishable..
I haven't seen something that I've wanted to comment on in quite a while, because the quality of concepts are so high, and so is this, but I felt it had such great potential, with just that extra righty tighty to get it perfecto!
