A Review of Website re-design for childcare company by Shawn Johnston

Tweaks needed

  • Shawn Johnston

    Shawn Johnston

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Tweaks needed

    Posted on Aug 26, 2010 at 1:03 PM

    Overall it's a nice design, balanced and bright. Great hero image as well, very engaging.

    1. A flexible... font is off. It might be the italics that are bugging me. Checkout the new Google Font API, perhaps there's a better font for this space that's a bit more attractive to work better with that great image
    2. The A Flexible... text and the 4 images, etc... below it could work better as a block as well as in relation to the 3 kids image. I'd recommend left justifying the h1 statement with the 4 thumbnails and moving the whole thing to the left while moving the kids more to the right. That'll reduce that uncomfortable gap in the middle there

    The rest is solid, though I'd find a new home for hte social icons at the bottom as well as a different one for the YouTube icon. They're lost all the way down there.

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