A Review of My portfolio by Ryan Sharp

Branding

  • Ryan Sharp

    Ryan Sharp

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    3 Votes
    Branding

    Posted on Aug 24, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    At first blush, I see some very popular design styles in use and it appears you know how to use them expertly. But I am left with a couple of question about the design shown above.

    First: I'm not confident that I understand the branding graphic... alitimate? The typography (especially with the lens flare) make it difficult to read.

    Second: all navigation falls below the fold.

    Third: Your positioning statement (what you have to offer me) is somewhat vague.

    I would suggest focusing on what you wish to accomplish with the site, and using the layout and interface of the site to communicate that message, and assist the user to move along that goal.

    For example, if this site is meant to be a portfolio site to attract potential clients, then use copy to convey that message and calls-to-action to help me to make contact with you.

    Good work. I hope to see more.

    • Mohammed Ali
      Mohammed Ali commented:
      Posted: on Aug 24, 2010 at 5:59 PM

      Firstly thnx for your comment!

      Yes, i know i have not followed the general practice and trends when it comes to the layout of the website.

      1. I wanted a very subtle background of the website so that my designs have complete focus. Thats why i have not given a lot fo importance to the branding-logo ..though its big..and i plan to give it a hover effect.

      2.There would be a small button said"menu" which would slide u down to the navigation. i want the visitor to have a look at my design and then come to the navigation. If he doesnt find it on top..he will scroll down...and as the website is just about my portfolio + contact form + about me..the navigation is not vital i reckon..!! So thats what's in my mind regarding the navigation...

      3.the statement will change its just temporary

      Yes, the design is not complete it will have more interactive buttons so that the visitor can reach me easily. Though i have tried doing something different to stand against the 100000s of other portfolios out there.

    • John Reen
      John Reen commented:
      Posted: on Sep 07, 2010 at 12:08 AM

      thnks for your comment!