A Review of Thanks for your Feedback on New Beauty Webstore by Michelle Waldorf

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  • Michelle Waldorf

    Michelle Waldorf

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    Posted on Aug 23, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    Messaging:

    At first glance, this looked like an x rated site. The message is confusing to me.

    How about using the text, "Be a star for $89", along with an image of a star getting followed by men or photographed at hot clubs? It would more clearly communicate your site's mission.

    On to the design...

    Overall, the text is a barrier to the shopping activity. The user should be shopping the second they hit this page. Add more product images and remove text & other distracting side activities.

    1. Replace the 3 grey divs under the main image and the "Welcome to Star Lace Wigs" sections with before and after photos from the customer photo gallery. A before and after picture gallery will demonstrate how well the product works in a nice visual.

    2. Show images of the "top sellers" instead of a list of text.

    Best of luck!