A Review of Trace Bundy poster by Amy Feger

space between the 7 and P

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    space between the 7 and P

    Posted on Aug 29, 2009 at 5:08 PM

    I think this piece is on the verge of perfect!

    I would personally only tweak up 4 things on the poster.

    Maybe change the "with" so it is not italic, maybe make the background of the guitar and Bundy the same as the pattern that you have set in back or visa versa.

    I would line up that red line above Central Washington University and the stuff between that and the bar under Bundy to a left alignment point.

    Lastly, I would pull that seven a bit more away from the P in PM. and line up the top of the 7PM to the top of the FREE.

    Cool looking tickets and overall great concept!

    • Stephanie Collins
      Stephanie Collins commented:
      Posted: on Aug 30, 2009 at 2:28 PM

      Thanks for your nitpickiness! (Is that a word?) I can see that you've got a good eye for typography, because I agree with your suggestions. Thank you!

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