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If I was a potential client, I think I would have a hard time figuring out what exactly it is that you are good at.
You have written quite a bit of text about various topics, but it's hard to understand what your approach is and what makes you special.
The graphic design is not the problem. It looks quite minimal, and you could certainly improve a few things here and there, but overall this is not something that I would change.
I would rather think about how you could be more persuasive. For example, you say on the home page that "Web 2.0" is one of your areas of expertise. Wouldn't it be ideal to demonstrate competence in that area by using elements like a blog, Twitter or videos? Or if package design is something that you offer as a service, why don't you show a package that you have designed? I know that you probably cannot show most of the things that you have done for clients, but you could just make up a cool project that shows your skills.
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Marius Wolf commented:It might make sense to integrate those examples into other pages instead of just putting them in one place. That would make it easier to access those and understand what you do.
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Richard Miles commented:
Thanks again - I really appreciated your comments and feedback - please take a look at my revision.
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www.rmilesllc.com
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Language Flags not Drop down Input
Oh come on, you can use there some nice flags icons, why drop down input? Because you have too many? If you use 16x16 pixel icons you have lots of space there!
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Align this Heading to the left!
I will align this h2 to the left and the content under it....well I will get to that on the next note :)
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This content..well rearrange it!
How rearrange? Easy one: First of all use some thumbs pictures in the front of the text and don't make them on 2 columns, just use 1 column of each! Simple list, because then you can align also the "Read More" which now is not align nicely!
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Here....Put a Picture!
Put a Picture here above the text, and move the under! You have now an empty space which is Not Okay!
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What's up here???
What's with this empty space??? Remove it please! :)
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Add here a <br>
Insert here a <br> to add an extra space between the text!
Thanks. There are a ton of examples in the "results" pages.