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- The stock photo is nice, but it would be better if it was a content slider that displayed this company's value propositions. It would help to summarize visually, the items in the bottom half of the page.
- I would move the translation button away from the logo, this is breaking all sorts of rules regarding branding. It should be a the footer or top right.
- Phone number at the top right should be removed and placed where "quickly from from idea to impact is". You can't have too many "slogans" it looks really confusing and my eye wants to wonder the more I look at it.
- The "lets get started" button is lost with the color. change it to bright green or red. I would remove the testimonial and place that as one of the content sliders, then with all those items on the bottom, spread them out for the whole width so that you do have that large white space in the bottom right. THEN I would find some more stock photos to illustrate each item. Then again, I am just a visual person and I got quickly bored with the text boxes.
- Why is there no picture of Richard if he's the main guy!
- I would invest into a wordpress theme and look for some inspiration on smashingmagazine.com for layout ideas.
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Richard Miles commented:
Thanks again - I really appreciated your comments and feedback - please take a look at my revision.
- The stock photo is nice, but it would be better if it was a content slider that displayed this company's value propositions. It would help to summarize visually, the items in the bottom half of the page.
www.rmilesllc.com
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Language Flags not Drop down Input
Oh come on, you can use there some nice flags icons, why drop down input? Because you have too many? If you use 16x16 pixel icons you have lots of space there!
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Align this Heading to the left!
I will align this h2 to the left and the content under it....well I will get to that on the next note :)
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This content..well rearrange it!
How rearrange? Easy one: First of all use some thumbs pictures in the front of the text and don't make them on 2 columns, just use 1 column of each! Simple list, because then you can align also the "Read More" which now is not align nicely!
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Here....Put a Picture!
Put a Picture here above the text, and move the under! You have now an empty space which is Not Okay!
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What's up here???
What's with this empty space??? Remove it please! :)
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Add here a <br>
Insert here a <br> to add an extra space between the text!
Nick, thanks, but, um, ahem, the image IS a slider, and it is a Wordpress theme, although a custom designed, not a stock theme. I appreciate the comments 2 & 3 and will make modifications to the layout. Thanks for the thoughts, much appreciated. Picture of Richard is on the "About" page.