A Review of Brochure and Logo for Men's Fraternity by Amy Feger

Hi! I love the pictures that you chose for this piece! The colors are also great. I wouldn't change much accept for a few touch ups:

Maybe?

In the Title All Men Die... since from afar it looks like the comma interferes with the word "live" and the title is awkwardly separated. I would suggest maybe to put "ALL MEN DIE," on the first line and then "FEW MEN TRULY LIVE" on the second line and leave out the period. also to open it up a tad between the two lines.

I only suggest to leave out the apostrophe due to all the white space it leaves between the N and S.

I would bring the last line of the address's words closer together between the city and the state, and the state and the zip.

Lastly, I would pull down where you have others place their name. So, it would look a bit more even with the other open spaces.

I think HEROES stamped against the dark color looks great and that there is nothing wrong with the familiarity to the audience to LEVI.

I like how in the white space under the M in the title page kinda looks like Batmans' mask.