A Review of CF Public & Expert Pitch Pages by Sathyan

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  • Sathyan

    Sathyan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Posted on Aug 14, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    For Public Feedback page

    1. Videos are really powerful in explaining things. Some of the users might want to see things in action. Show them a clear picture with a quality narration. A bit of animated characters(this is a personal choice;)).
    2. Remove the bugatti veyron link. I happened to think that there is going to something special behind the link. Not a good idea to take your user to another website.
    3. There are too many tick marks used as icon for various points. I understand it 'll be a bit tricky to create lots of icons. we can try for a few. A little suggestion here. 5 reviews guranteed can have a big 5 and a small reviews icon
    4. (MARKETING ASPECT) Free for a starving artist makes sense - but can be a little more inviting. Sure it pushes user to look at the other options. I have read that converting user from free account -> paid account can be done intelligently.
    5. (MARKETING ASPECT) I'm not sure if i'm making a right point here. Is it possible to say, a small portfolio site owner can use this account. If you want feedback for you networking site, we suggest this account for you....
    6. Our members don’t lie. Not about CF, at least. - add a video for this too. An expert interview. 2 mins of real people talking will do the trick of pages of writing. When the video is more than just a person sitting on a chair, show the designer's studio, his equipment, his artboard.

    For Expert Feedback page

    1. Show the experts at the top of the page.
    2. Show one expert, a brief bio, 2 lines of quote and a small 2 minute video., how they had created change. the maximum amount of digestible information in a single page is better than pages with max information linked together.
    3. A minor thing. Instead of You will receive feedback from a total of 3 expert(s). It can be Design Expert 1 + Usability Expert 2 + Marketing Expert 3 = Total 6 Experts With Icons of the 3 experts

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    $ / Credits

    Like others have said... these are credits or $'s I'm confused as I would prefer Professional feedback, but I nor my boss will be paying $50 per concept I post...

  • 2

    Ampersand

    remove it or make it darker

  • 3

    font size

    maybe it's just me but this font size looks smaller then the reviews on the left hand side... probably just the kerning

  • 4

    Columns

    Maybe make these different shades of grey / green to differentiate the importance of each of the sections

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    This scares me

    If I can indeed use my credits, then it may be best to state that here.

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