• Ravi Kumar V.

    Ravi Kumar V.

    Rank: 10 Newbie

    43

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Nice try

    Posted on Aug 14, 2010 at 5:03 AM

    actually it not looks like normal other websites. This is a site with new theme. Good

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Aug 15, 2010 at 4:09 PM

      Yet again, a totally useless review... I wish there was still the down vote option!

    • Richard Banfield
      Richard Banfield commented:
      Posted: on Aug 15, 2010 at 4:18 PM

      Agreed. This comment was not in depth enough to warrant being posted.

    • Tom Charde
      Tom Charde commented:
      Posted: on Aug 19, 2010 at 9:14 PM

      Richard is being nice; this post has little coherence, let alone depth. Looks like someone put words in a blender, hit "Puree" and then posted it as a review. Fail.

    • Ravi Kumar V.
      Ravi Kumar V. commented:
      Posted: on Aug 20, 2010 at 1:40 PM

      oh Dear God, all I said was is "This website looks really very good, with good color theme and image selection like not others do" which means this site builted wihtout normal sections like header, body part and footer. which meant I was really amazed by this site. By in hurry and lake of my english fluency you mistaken me. (FYI: English is not my mother tongue)

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Aug 21, 2010 at 2:10 AM

      Ok Ravi, I get that it's not your mother tongue, but when you post a review it helps to be more in depth, and with a heading like "nice try" and a score of all 3's & 2's it looks like you are posting reviews so that you can get your quota... We designer's, developer's and marketer's post our work on here to get feedback... what you posted was poor.

www.makeovermachine.com

  • 1

    Header

    Push the main tagline down below the header to cater for a possible navigation, and to clearly define the header of the website.

  • 2

    Call to Action Panel

    I'd push this down below the bullet points as a horizontal row

  • 3

    Smaller Graphic

    Could make the graphic a little smaller so that it lines up with the left set of bullet points. Your main tagline would site above this, likely horizontally and center aligned.

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    Divider

    Create some sort of clear definition between the main banner graphic, and the portfolio section. Currently, this part looks like a simple H2 following some intro content.

  • 2

    Client Name

    The heading for the client name is a little strange as it doesn't cut across both screenshots. Consider extending it all the way to the right, or lose the background color and have a simple border-bottom.

  • 3

    More Footer

    I hope that's not the end of the footer. The top area seems to have so much effort put into it, but the footer seems like a disappointing afterthought. Even if you intend not to have a top navigation, do keep a good footer with the necessary legal info and links, about and contact information. The footer should be light text on a dark background (not unlike the CF site) for a clear definition as well.