A Review of LOGO DESIGN by Joshua Wold

Some revision :)

  • Joshua Wold

    Joshua Wold

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Some revision :)

    Posted on Aug 11, 2010 at 10:55 PM

    Overall this is a good design. I like the lightbulb concept (I think that's what this is?) but it feels like it could still use a bit of massaging to pull it together.

    Without knowing exactly what it's for I'm not sure about the (magenta?) color on the left two logos. It strikes me as too feminine of your target audience is everyone.

    On the middle image the "you just need an idea" is a bit of a stretch to try and read, might want to make that more visible.

    This feels like it's close to being ready but isn't quite done. The lightbulb modifications might help.

before feedback

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    Font - try another

    helvetica?

  • 2

    Font - try another

    helvetica?

  • 3

    kerning

    tighten it up

before feedback

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    kerning

    tighten it up

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