• Joshua Wold

    Joshua Wold

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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Aug 11, 2010 at 10:49 PM

    Front side: I'd continue to work on the silhouette of the woman. The bust and arms feel like they need revision, don't look entirely realistic, for example the elbows seem out of place. Also the twitter and facebook icons feel out of place on this card.

    On the backside the text is a bit hard to read with the blue silhouette behind it, might consider fading that out a bit. Also, I hope the rendering of the text looks better in final output, it's looking strange here.

    Good luck with your card and the business!