A Review of Logo design & business card design for Vitality Mums by Andrew Sharp

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  • Andrew Sharp

    Andrew Sharp

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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Aug 06, 2010 at 10:52 PM

    Take the people on the bottom right off. It doesn't need them and would look better with just white space there.

    • Garden Book
      Garden Book commented:
      Posted: on Aug 07, 2010 at 3:54 AM

      Thanks.. would you suggest that they are removed from the front and back of the business card?

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    • Andrew Sharp
      Andrew Sharp commented:
      Posted: on Aug 07, 2010 at 4:54 AM

      I would definitely take them off of both sides and replace the cheesy script font of Debra and replace it with the actual signature in something like a permanent marker (digitally of course)

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    • Garden Book
      Garden Book commented:
      Posted: on Aug 07, 2010 at 6:38 AM

      Thanks for this feedback. It really helps. Will remove the ladies and write my signiture in permanent marker and upload to the business card. Cheers

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