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Hi there, I like your idea of the light bulb. At first I read Samadvertising, then after reading your tag I got the message that the S is a light bulb.
- Work on the tag line a bit more. With the logo so prominent I keep reading "So you need an idea"
- The font on the first logo is great; clear, sharp and easy to read
- Make sure you work on the curve of the "S" a bit more, I can tell where the anchor points are in the middle section of the "S".
- Try a version with a deep yellow/orange and post it :)
- Just for fun, have you tried looking at those energy-efficient light bulbs? Maybe that can give you an idea on the shape of the S.
Thank you for sharing!
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Font - try another
helvetica?
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Font - try another
helvetica?
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kerning
tighten it up
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tighten it up
