A Review of LOGO DESIGN by Berenice Limon

Have you tried a deep yellow/orange color?

  • Berenice Limon

    Berenice Limon

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    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Have you tried a deep yellow/orange color?

    Posted on Aug 05, 2010 at 10:50 PM

    Hi there, I like your idea of the light bulb. At first I read Samadvertising, then after reading your tag I got the message that the S is a light bulb.

    • Work on the tag line a bit more. With the logo so prominent I keep reading "So you need an idea"
    • The font on the first logo is great; clear, sharp and easy to read
    • Make sure you work on the curve of the "S" a bit more, I can tell where the anchor points are in the middle section of the "S".
    • Try a version with a deep yellow/orange and post it :)
    • Just for fun, have you tried looking at those energy-efficient light bulbs? Maybe that can give you an idea on the shape of the S.

    Thank you for sharing!

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    Font - try another

    helvetica?

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    Font - try another

    helvetica?

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    kerning

    tighten it up

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    kerning

    tighten it up

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