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Hi Ilan,
Well, like the guys said creating a html e-mail is a little bit complicated. So, in my opinion you should hire a professional.
- The layout is too crowded, there
s too much information and its poorly organized, making it hard to read a paragraph or pay attention to something. - I don
t know where to start reading, maybe you should work on the hierarchy of the elements, see whats more important and what could be moved to a secondary section. - I don
t think you used a color scheme while you were designing the layout, its a good idea to have a color scheme and use it, not only to keep the identity of your business visible to your readers, but to make it more organized and clean. - In my opinion you used too many images, it will certainly make your final file heavy, try to remove some unnecessary images and elements, make it cleaner!
- Consistency is important to make your readers follow the text as it was supposed to be followed, try to use a specific color, size and font for all similar elements, like headers, paragraphs, buttons, etc.
- Get a redesign for your website, make it more informative, create a strong identity. I don`t see much sense on investing your time and money on email newsletters while your website and your identity needs to be worked.
Sorry for my bad english.
- The layout is too crowded, there
