A Review of Empire Lacrosse by Ross Tulloch

Hi Dan,

I would suggest adding some graphics to the page background - maybe even in a graffiti style, or a 'splash' style.

For example see;

http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-illustration-9221265-grunge-elements.php

http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-illustration-11992294-graffiti-background.php

Adding these sorts of elements will create interest and attract your target audience.

Good luck,

Ross