A Review of Business Card by Abhishek Kumar

a few things..

  • Abhishek Kumar

    Abhishek Kumar

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    a few things..

    Posted on Aug 02, 2010 at 3:56 PM

    please try different sizes of photographs and a different grid structure- a few of the photographs could go even bigger - right now everything is kind of the same.. the image of the couple is grabbing bit too much attention.. that is way too much closeup for what u have here. The baseball image could go to the right, otherwise it is pointing towards a dead-end (horse image is a good example). - so try rearranging it a bit more and go wild with size difference.

    i would prefer to see at-least ur name on front side, also try to use the red u have at back somehow used on front too.. otherwise both the sides would look entirely two different worlds.

    with just the photographs up front, you are highlighting the fact that you are a photographer, web designer part is really not emphasized. i am not suggesting to include screen-shots of your work- rather this is just to caution you that you will be trusted more as a photographer than a web designer looking at this business card.

    • Noel Tock
      Noel Tock commented:
      Posted: on Aug 04, 2010 at 8:59 AM

      Hi Abhishek,

      Thank you for the feedback, I agree on many of the image alignment comments. As mentioned in a previous comment, I may try to do two cards. I've tried merging both but I'd be spreading myself too thin.

      Cheers

      Noel