A Review of Floss by Daniel Morrison

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  • Daniel Morrison

    Daniel Morrison

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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    Spacing

    Posted on Jul 20, 2010 at 3:29 PM

    I like the background and the navigation in the top right, they flow well with each other.

    However, I think there is too much space in the main content area, between the shape background and the text, I think the text should be pushed left a bit more.

    Also, the design would be better if you didn't have the transparency in the main content area. Also I don't agree with the soft glow.

    The arrows seem a bit too basic, so i assume they're just placeholders?

    I think fix the above comments and it will start to look a lot better.

    Good luck