A Review of Floss by Carole Felmy

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  • Carole Felmy

    Carole Felmy

    Rank: 2 Titan

    531

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
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    Posted on Jul 18, 2010 at 8:46 PM

    I understand the idea behind the 'about' headline, but it kind of looks cheap, maybe because of the thickness or the font, not sure...

    With the colour theme, if you're going for freshness you've got it... though it's almost overpowering: I can smell mint just looking at it (that would make me expect the floss to be mint coated, is it ??)... So anyway, freshness = good thing if you think about your teeth, but maybe keep in mind the chill factor may need some sort of 'warming' element to balance out (I don't know, maybe like a smiling person portrait for example...).

    • Jason
      Jason commented:
      Posted: on Jul 19, 2010 at 1:45 AM

      Thanks for the review Carole. Seems like most of the review is some what positive, if you have a moment could you explain why you posted such low numbers? I'm not offended, just want to learn more about your thoughts, thanks!