A Review of Dataserv Logo by Jamal Jackson

Hi Robin, you seem to have a good concept behind your design, but I feel it can be much better.

1. Choose a new font. The font you have used here is too overused in the design community in my opinion. Take some more time looking around places like dafont to find a good font that has not been used so much.

2. Don't put what you do in your logo. You shouldn't incorporate a phrase in your logo if it is not done so properly. Putting a phrase below your logo without it being incorporated into your overall design is a bad practice that seems good, but really takes away from your logo's universal appeal.

3. Work on spacing. Your letters are a bit too close. Add a pixel or two between each one.

   Overall, this is good first try at your logo. Here are some tutorials i found helpful when I started to redo my brand's logo. Hope they help you as much as me.

http://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2009/02/how-to-create-a-professional-logo/

http://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2009/06/12-essential-rules-to-follow-when-designing-a-logo/

http://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2010/05/creating-a-logotype-depends-more-on-the-means-than-the-end/

hhttp://www.smashingmagazine.com/2009/08/26/vital-tips-for-effective-logo-design/