A Review of College of Science Tabloid Viewbook by Ben Hewitt

Good job

I think as it goes its a nice piece

I could nitpick but I think print is a lot more subjective than web stuff

I like what you've done with the type although I think you could pick some better typefaces that would complement each other within that block. But its nice and it works.

I think for my taste there is a little too much going on and the composition could be worked on a bit... I'm kind of struggling with a focal point.

Id like to see the block of text moved up a touch so we can see the a to b a bit better.

The thread and bird are cool but it'd be nice if the thread was brought around the text - maybe even circling it before it goes into the birds mouth as to group the text and make this a strong focal point (move bird above text and centre text within brown bit of cover)