A Review of College of Science Tabloid Viewbook by Carole Felmy

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  • Carole Felmy

    Carole Felmy

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    Posted on Jul 16, 2010 at 3:14 AM

    Just picking some details here, but I really like the look of this, it definitely draws my attention.

    • is the thread supposed to be within the beak of the crow ? I would make it go over the bottom half of it.

    • the first E in Celebratory comes too close to the L because of the italic...

    • the 'follow the thread" sentence could be following the thread, rather than doing a smiley, to reinforce the concept...

    • Carole Felmy
      Carole Felmy commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2010 at 3:35 AM

      PS: the crow does look like a crow to me too.

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    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Jul 16, 2010 at 9:24 AM

      Carole, Yes the thread would go through the beak - I did these in about 2 hours starting at 3am so admittedly it's thrown together with little details like that being left for later - I am glad you were looking at enough to catch it though! - thanks

      Thanks for the type critique I appreciate it!

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