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Hello Aaran
This is a good idea, the colours are very nice. I find the bubbles look a bit too much like clip art 0 even if they're not. How about trying to integrate a bubble look on the text itself?
Also, the kerning on the Harabara font is a bit dodgy especially with the "lin", generally some of the letters look a bit squashed. I'm not really a fan of the other font either - how about something much more atypical and conventional? I wouldn't think it's really important for a laundry service logo to "stand out", laundry is just what it is, nobody is going to decide which laundry service to use based on a logo.
So maybe go for a more conventional font, and possibly look at reworking the bubbles. I generally don't think it'd matter if it looked unoriginal and atypical, uniqueness is not important here.
Just my thoughts! Good luck :)
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Aaran, good logo.
I agree with Michael that those bubbles are problematic. I would suggest removing them. If you need an icon a stack of folded linen should be better. People are interested in the end product and are not concerned about cleaning process, washing powder, bubbles and ironing :)
Cheers Michael