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Definitely the first one. The font is a lot better. Also i didn't like the bubbles in the second one. I really didn't like the placement of the bubbles in the first one either. And perhaps you can do without then and just have them as a fun recurrent feature of business cards, website, stationery and so on.
Only thing to complain about the font is that i find the "i" and "n" to close to each other in "linen". Make sure to have the same about of space between those two and the other, or it tends to look cheap (like a free font you grabbed online).
About the colors, I do like it and I do not like it. I am torn. I have seen it before. I've seen it before. For some reason i do not find the lime green very attractive when it comes to clean clothes. Then again, I can't really come up with a better suggestion.
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You know you are right about all those things, the thing I am finding the hardest is to create an inspirational logo, with these words it's just so bloody boring…"clean linen" The colors come about because of an existing brand that I created for the client a year or so ago, and now they want to sell off this franchise completely… I think I'll go back to the drawing board, I am not completely happy, with the font, or even the placement, but thanks all the same for your review.