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The one thing I want to say is that the Popup is to aggressive!
Have you ever heard about jquery dialogs??? http://jquery.com/ This is a nice alternative for popups, not to scary people away! You put a warning icon on the popup and if you don't read people thing that they clicked somewhere else and just close it without reading!
You have to make the people to read it, and in order to do that, you need a much more friendly pop up or I really use those jquery dialogs!!!
And other confusing things about the design here I see a nice good looking green button with "Place order", now on the website the "Buy Now" it's just text, I hope you are going to replace that with a button :)
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Liviu Anghelina commented:Sure! I linked a screen shot and you can see how the jquery dialog looks! http://www.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/8d09b01ac73fae8553c7b7dc7173e1a96g.jpg
This is the link for jquery dialog that you might wanna use: http://docs.jquery.com/UI/Dialog
You can create your own theme, just spend some time and read the jquery documentation, is easy to setup! If you need help we are here!
I am sure most of the designers use jquery ;)
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https://www.instantwartmoleremover.com/checkout.php
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Navigation font
This font feels a tiny bit large and a bit clunky - a smaller size and a bit more subtlety may help here.
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Good clear progress steps
This part is great. Nice and clear and cleanly done although the margin to the left of the type feels a bit tight.
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Product and guarantee all looking great too
The packaging looks great and the 30 day money back guarantee is looking fine.
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It's this area which really needs work
The head, body copy, Lmited Time offer and place order button: The head I think would be better ranged left - also it should read You have nothing to lose rather than Your have... The Act Now feels a bit pushy and also this whole area feels a bit too wordy. Rather than saying you have nothing to lose. Rather sell it with 'You're a step closer to more blemish free skin' or something like that. A more positive approach... The body needs more space in the line height to help it breathe. Again I'd focus on a more positive word approach rather than focus on the fact that it's not the least expensive just focus on it being . Quality Product . Doctor Approved . Only product guaranteed to work in one 15 minute application or your money back. . Limited Time Offer I'd bullet point those four points. That way the fact that it costs more doesn't have to be mentioned but people should automatically assume that the extra price is because it's the ONLY product guar
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This page feels too cheap in design terms
This page feels particularly like it really needs designing properly for the web. The model is great but the typography on her is awful. The Buy it Now centred in the panel next to it and the extra copy below is very badly designed. The type isn't aligning at the bottom with the bottom of the image. Guaranteed Wart Removal in red and underlined feels a very old fashioned and clunky ugly way of trying to get attention from the viewer. The As seen advertised could do with separating out from the rest of the content more. Maybe in a line at the bottom rather than at the top or in a boxed out area. I would look at trying to find a nice large full width image with the same feel as your nice smiley woman and then find one nice sell line to put on the image. Maybe have a tagline under that a bit smaller. The product shots could go smaller and the navigation could sit on top of an area of sky on the right - you can always extend sky areas to help bring all the elements of your banner to
can you detail how you see using a jquery dialog instead?